RAYCHIL!!! I am at a lost for words you gotta give me a sec here!!!

When one begins to cry
The other is torn apart
^^^ Even though I don't have a man in my life, I feel that way for my friends..I don't have a sister so I look to friends as sisters and when I see one cry it just breaks my heart so bad

Secondly, I just love how you start with one boy, one girl, these two people..and ended it that way too...it gave your poem a great structure to it! I loved this poem and if it happened to be about you then it makes me completley happy because everyone in this world really does need a friend...its a great thing to see and read about!! I enjoyed this poem very much makes me want to read again!
Chelsey-Lynn

P.S Your comments on my poetry is much appreciated..never think your comments go unheard :-)

Geez! I come back from vacation and you have 10 new poems? I have to catch up! But this poem was brillant. I loved its uncoiling meaning that the poem slowly released... it was perfect. 5/5!

Rachel i love this poem...thank you..:')

This POEM IS SO GOOD!! plreas write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this poem~ keep writing!!