Don't Slip Away

by Carmen   Jun 9, 2006


You're always on my mind.
I dream of our bodies entwining.
But since you seem so far away,
I gaze out the window, sighing.

Loneliness swirls all around me
Like leaves in the blustering wind.
Don't let our love slip away
Before it even begins.

Embracing seems a lot like a fantasy,
One that will never come true.
Fairytale days are over now,
But my dreams are still all about you.

Memories of you and me together
Have mostly gone astray.
Love is calling out to us,
So please don't slip away.

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  • 18 years ago

    by paddy

    Wow,
    how old are you 15 blimey i wish i could write like that when i was 15
    you have great talent and you showed your feelings beautifully
    i've felt like this and its amazeing feeling
    who ever this poem is for is a lucky guy
    i cant wait to read more
    keep it up
    lorna
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by JR13

    Yo poems are real good I understand how you feel keep writin let me know when you got some more poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Meggie33

    That was really good, i liked it a lot, i could feel what you were trying to say, and the emotions that you were trying to express with your words....good job! u r right about the ???? marks but u should probably edit them out, becuase some, unlike me, might let that ruin how highly they think of the poem! i liked it a lot,,, great job!

    **meggie**

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    K i don't know whats up with the question marks, but pretend they're not there, k? much love, carmen

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