Comments : Don't Slip Away

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    K i don't know whats up with the question marks, but pretend they're not there, k? much love, carmen

  • 18 years ago

    by Meggie33

    That was really good, i liked it a lot, i could feel what you were trying to say, and the emotions that you were trying to express with your words....good job! u r right about the ???? marks but u should probably edit them out, becuase some, unlike me, might let that ruin how highly they think of the poem! i liked it a lot,,, great job!

    **meggie**

  • 18 years ago

    by JR13

    Yo poems are real good I understand how you feel keep writin let me know when you got some more poems

  • 18 years ago

    by paddy

    Wow,
    how old are you 15 blimey i wish i could write like that when i was 15
    you have great talent and you showed your feelings beautifully
    i've felt like this and its amazeing feeling
    who ever this poem is for is a lucky guy
    i cant wait to read more
    keep it up
    lorna
    xxx