by Ashleigh Skye Jun 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Pretend like you actually know me, |
Wow.. this is a great poem.. i like how you say it was your only choice and people didnt understnad that.. also you were very descritpive .. you choose your words carefully and its clear.. it really helps bring your peotry to life.. again another flawless poem |
by lana
Thats so sad you had a hard time at skool |
I really like your series. (obsessing the negative a bit though, aren't there any 'happy' people in this school?). I know a few kids who dropped out of highschool. this one guy I know though, I think he'll do alright. |
by HOLLY ARMER
Powerful message! Your ability to put yourself in someone elses mind set and write from their POV is brilliant. |
Brilliant poem, i really love this series you're doing, it's so insightfull and thought provoking. i especially loved this line: |