by Brittney Follett Jun 9, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Walking through the halls, I can still hear my screams. |
You are so talented! Another amazing one, but the part 2 of "Death" is more focussed on emotions then imagery, which is good, because that changes the atmosphere and keep the poem interesting. Whole poem is long, but it is so effective in every part, that I even want to read more! |
Aww. that was cool. i love two parters. keep it up bub |
Wow.. i LOVED the ending.. it was perfect.. again good rhymes and great emotion.. the flow was better in this half than the first and in this line |
by Jenni
I must say that this is the longest poem i've read on poems-and-quotes. It is very good, not once did I feel like it lacked anywhere. Just amazing! 5/5 |
by Katlynn
Amazing half of this peom. but what i caught in this is that you wanted to be dead but you were already dead so i don't know what that make since or something so yeah that's what i caught but anyways this was an amazing half like i have said in the beginning you did an amazing job. |