BEAUTIFULL!!!....

so well written, great flow, such emotion, so sad but simply gorgeous aswell... 5/5

Nicely done i was quite entertained keep it up 5/5

Nicely done it kept me well entertained 5/5 loved how u could rhyme that much

Wow. this is a very strong story. it's very descriptive and there are very vivid mental images in my mind. 5/5

Wow.. this poem is really amazing.. the rhyme is great and it really tells a story well.. there were a couple of flowing problems here and there but nothing making it compliucated to read.. nice job!

I love this, its very intruging, maybe you could use little astericks (*) as quotation marks? just to make it a lil easier to read, anyway, well done, once again you show your beautiful talent

much love and many kisses,
bex

You amaze me with every line, I'm speechless, this poem is so powerful and unique, you have great imagination. You're becoming one of my favorite authors on this site, I love your pieces. This is written with amazing creativity, I like it from the beginning to the end. Imagery in the whole poem is superb, greatly created.