Aww great poem 5/5

I completely know how you feel. The same thing is happening to me right now. If you ever need to talk you can email at littlebrazil_2@hotmail.com. Oh and great poem keep up the good work.

This flows well, and the rhymes work too. It seemed to get better towards the end, this is a really cool piece. However I think you mean 'role' instead of 'roll,' that's the only suggestion i have. Keep writing xx

This has a language that just speaks to me...I understand what it is implying, the theme is wonderful. {5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

Aww hunn.. greeat and emotional poem! btw if u ever need help feel free to send a personal msg.. there are ppl who care!!
loads of love.
lostlllsoul

Hey darl a t0uching piece l0t 0f emt0i0n in this. i h0pe ur 0hk. this was sad but very well written xx

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Amazing hun i loves it...i love this bit...
Feeling your arms around me like before
This makes me want you more and more
Drowning myself in the emotion I feel
When nothing else has felt this real

5/5 i hearts it

Excellent! You write so well! I am amazed at your poems!! So good!! -May

I thought the title was kind of long. The rest of the poem was well written though. Good idea for the title, but I think you should use something else.

Hey great job!! I know how this feels and its not great wanting someone that you cant and all you do is wish and long for their touch. just dont give up keep looking and you never know what will happen next.
~DyingBlackRose~