Aww how sweet. LOL:

Wow, you got me a bit sidetracked in the first part of the poem. Surprising ending!

I've read almost all of your poems, and commented on most of them, soooo I guessfor this contes thingy I'll just have to do them again...

I liked this poem, cuz 1 you don't have a daughter, and 2 it's nice to see you writing a funny poem.

It lets me know that ur not completly dead inside lol. J/K

Rave

You have presented the other side of a favorite childhood game.

I like the build up in this poem as it leads you rite through to an unexpected end. Wonderfully expressed.