Comments : Finally unbroken

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I'm sort of confused about the message of this poem, especially concerning the last stanza. It seems as if you're happy again, and then it says that, even though you're smiling, you still hide something inside, but you're unbroken. It's probubly just me though.. I'm most likely reading it wrong :/
    Anywho, I love it anyways. All of your work seems to capture real life in someway or another, and the words just capture my attention, as if I was reading your biography, and even my own. You are a fantastic writer.. keep it up!!