Wow I LOVE the message in this. Wonderful, a truly marvelous write, my dear.

"the one u has the power to change.."

Could you be trying to say "You are the one who has the power to change" or something to that effect?

I'd also try to keep away from using one letter words instead of spelling them out, like you instead of you. I don't know about anybody else, but I find it makes a huge difference. Sometimes poor grammar can distract the reader from such a powerful message, such as this one that you were trying to send out.

None-the-less, it really hit my heart. I was absolutely captivated by each word, and you're right. We are losing way too many people, mainly teenagers, to suicide. Sadly, it's a reality that we all live near to, but each year more and more are actually giving into it. It's sad that so many people are throwing their lives away. This poem inspires me to be a better person. Thanks for sharing it =)