I really love Harry Potter and all and the theme of the poem was chosen well. The alphabet theme I didn't even notice til I read the explaination but it was different and pretty good. Some of the lines though seemed a bit repetitive:
Edging towards insanity,
Failing to understand.
Quarantined by the maddness,
Leaving only insanity on the surface.

But other than that it was a pretty good poem.

Hey, this is an awesome poem, i liked the style of working through the alphabet, it must have been a challenge- so well done there, it was done with style. I'm not a huge Harry Potter fan, but I still found this a spellbinding read.

This is a great poem, and i see the angle that it's coming from. I am a fan of HP myself and this is a wonderful poem, i hope that it does well for you in the contest because it is very unique.

"Hoping it a dream for sure."
Should that be "Hoping it's a dream for sure"
?
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"Inside your mind its cluttered,"
should be it's, with an apostrophe
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"Many people misake the knowledge for fanasty,"
fantasy, not fanasty
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"Quarantined by the maddness,"
madness only has 1 'd'
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I thought your form was really interesting, and you did a good job retelling parts of the story.

I felt like you could have worked the rhythm a bit more, but the form was pretty demanding.

Wow
that was really, really beautiful! great job!
5/5

Aw wow. At first I didn't understand what you meant about the letters thing. But I see it now after reading back over it. That was really clever tehe. The poem was great I thought. Really good. And to have it sound great with the whole thing you were doing. That was even better. 5/5 From me =D Keep it up.

`Taleee xx

I really like how you wrote this! The alphabet thing is so cool! I love Harry Potter, I haven't read the 5th book yet though. The poem was great!

I read this in the contest.. and i thought it was just amazing.. but the second time i read it, it was even better! this was a very very good poem.. the emotions were clear and the flow was good.. nice write! 5/5

That was the best, i dont know how ya do it, all that stuff, i wish to do all that stuff at the age of 16.

U seems to be a die hard fan of Harry Potter, well i hvnt gone thro it so far but sounds interesting.. :o)

well i really liked ur poem as it needs a lot of talent to try such a pattern and u justified it...great poem indeed

all the best and take care
5/5

I think it is wonderfl how you made it your poem from reading the book.