La La Land

by JL   Jun 9, 2006


Swirling liquid sky
Dotted with cotton candy clouds
Lemon drop sun
Sugar birds fly around

Toasted almond beach
Refreshing minty waves
Swedish fish swim
Protecting treasure caves

Atop grassy hills
Gingerbread-man runs to and fro
Looking for gumdrop greenhouses
But down which path should he go?

Take the road less taken
Beneath the chocolate trees
Every step is an adventure
With plenty of new things to see

Skipping down m&m cobblestone
With fondant clothes in hand
Went the second star on the left-not right
And ended up in La La Land

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  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
    When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
    Appreciated- Truly Spoken

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Very cute! think about children`s books??

  • 18 years ago

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    The Secret To Creative Poetry Is Imagery, You've Won Me Over With This One, I'm Really Impressed, I Didn't Know All Of That Could Come Out Of You....You Have Awesome Potential And I'm Just In a "WOW" State Right Now lol *Luv U* 5/5
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  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    So dreamy and fantastic with lovely images mmm i agree with Sunny, I could eat it

    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    This was yummy to read! A true delight, filled with creativity and fun! A wonderful poem and well-deserved of reconigition ^_^
    Amour,
    Kim

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