Yeah this was good alothough it made absolutly no sense..like the first stanza was cool but the second one didn't really get there...still a 5/5 though..it sounded cool at least lol

I liked it a lot! It kind of makes since in a twisted sort of way? Sometimes the best poems don't make a lick of sense! Awesome poem.

Thats a good poem... i loved it :)

keep it up

Great poem hun!

Ok babes wot the hell have u been smokin? interestin poem babes