by delana Jun 9, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Speak not them words "i love you" |
by smit
Like this piece, havent read your other pieces but liked this one a lot, gets your fear across very well, why you are so shy... but had to read it twice to get the flow of it, maybe it was not meant to be that flowing thats the only constructive criticism i can think of, keep it up :-) |