Wow this has to be one of my favorite poems you wrote!! awsome job!! how do you come up with the stuff you write about!!! great job!!

I like it. You kept it simple and got to the point. Your a nice poet.

Wow thats amazing. i realy like it.. ur very talented.. it has good flow and rhythm to it.. great job. thnx for the comment on my poem it means alot to me.. i realy like this poem. amazing.. keep it up
take care
angie

Good poem

This poem was great, 5/5. I really liked the flow of it, it's awesome.