Another one about a depressed girl

by Jec   Jun 10, 2006


She has nothing to lose
She has everything to gain
She takes a couple of pills
It helps ease the pain

The people are around
They stare at her in disgust
They don't know what she goes through
Her Pain, Her Tears, Her Loss and her fears

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  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Amazing i love it . it rhymes perfectly great job. short but sweet.. i like it alot. keep it up 5/5
    angie

  • 18 years ago

    by Tattoo The World

    I think it works. Kudos, Jec, kudos.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lucy

    Um.. It was great ryming until the end maybe if you take the fears of it mihgt work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Beautifully Nothing

    Very well written, and sadly true for many people. Good job

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