That is such a sombre piece of balladry honey. i hope things turn out ok. ive been there, and while it seems to hurt so much, it will pass and it will get better. i wish u all the best, and keep up the writing hey. its the best way to let go of bitter feelings. peace :)
dani xx

Hey darl a very t0uching peice very well written. l0t 0f em0ti0n in this. thank u f0r ur c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t xx

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Wow..beautiful write..sad,touching deep...yet well penned write filled with powerful emotions..Kp writing hun!
5/5

xxPoojaxx

Aw, this poem was so heartfelt and sweet..you did a really nice job, and it flowed beautifully!

Brooke<3