Lost control..

by Lucy   Jun 10, 2006


On her knees and begging it will stop,
She cries with pain.

No smile is present,
No laugh is heard,
Whining and crying fills with gore.

Everything around her,
Black and white,
floor filled with puddles,
Nothing but puddles in sight.

Dying of a broken heart,
And whining in pain,
All she wants,
Is her heart to be whole again.

She's tried every thing,
Everything in mind,
But nothing perfectly worked,
Everyone left behind.

Gripping her legs,
And dipping her head in shame,
She hides her swollen smile,
She cries tears of a flame.

Nothing makes sense,
Everything is blurred,
No-one around her cares,
Or even heard.

She only wants everything to be whole,
Everyone to treat her equal,
Yeah she maybe different,
But her emotions are so sequel.

Some people struggle to give her one look,
Some give her plenty,
She gives them a smile one behind the pain,
She can give them glares, but how many?

Eyeliner runs,
Runs down her beautiful face,
She struggles to breathe,
She can't keep with the pace.

Finally the door rang,
With a dark melody tune,
Something dropped through.

The rose had a white tag attached onto it,
Attached with black lace,
Text written in liquid as she see it state,
I love you, There's nothing about you that i can hate..

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  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Omg wow i kno how that feels to except not hte last part.. its so cute i loved it.. words cant even describe how amazing this poem is.. i love it.. its soo good. keep writing ur amazing at it
    angie

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    Wow, this poem i just...........wow it's amazing. I've lived this scene so many times, except the last part. That part made me smile and say awww. You're an amazing writer, I hope to read more of yyour poems. 5/5

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by MiSsEdHeArT

    OMG! This is a really good poem! I enjoyed reading this a lot! Good work! 5/5 the end all most gave me tears when someone left her a note! I love it! hehe