Comments : Lost control..

  • 18 years ago

    by MiSsEdHeArT

    OMG! This is a really good poem! I enjoyed reading this a lot! Good work! 5/5 the end all most gave me tears when someone left her a note! I love it! hehe

  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    Wow, this poem i just...........wow it's amazing. I've lived this scene so many times, except the last part. That part made me smile and say awww. You're an amazing writer, I hope to read more of yyour poems. 5/5

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Omg wow i kno how that feels to except not hte last part.. its so cute i loved it.. words cant even describe how amazing this poem is.. i love it.. its soo good. keep writing ur amazing at it
    angie