by Flying Phoenix Jun 10, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I stare quietly at the floor |
by Tara
And there are the tiles |
by Sophie
Excellent poem.. |
by IML
Superb!! Thank you for your comment also by the way. My relationships in my pasts 2 years I was living Overseas in Israel has been screw ups and I had finally found my one. Ever since I met her, I grew much love for Poetry. I got so well at it that in 2 months, I started researching and studying it and reading the dictionary finding stronger words and bigger quotes and meanings lol. Thank you again. and VVery VVVVVERRRYYY great poem! lol. bye |
by Fig
That is such a beautiful poem! the imagery and the language...soo poinant...so lingering. its truely beautiful and theres soo much emotion pent up in it. a truely amazing poem! |
by Casey
Your poem was written perfect and in the moment of me reading it, I seemed to disapear into your words. I know exactly what you were feeling when you wrote this. I love it. Casey |