I know how you feel. It's been going on for me too. :( I liked the poem, was put together well. Good stuff.

Awwww...babydoll! *hugs*

Your poem was written perfect and in the moment of me reading it, I seemed to disapear into your words. I know exactly what you were feeling when you wrote this. I love it. Casey

That is such a beautiful poem! the imagery and the language...soo poinant...so lingering. its truely beautiful and theres soo much emotion pent up in it. a truely amazing poem!
xxx

Superb!! Thank you for your comment also by the way. My relationships in my pasts 2 years I was living Overseas in Israel has been screw ups and I had finally found my one. Ever since I met her, I grew much love for Poetry. I got so well at it that in 2 months, I started researching and studying it and reading the dictionary finding stronger words and bigger quotes and meanings lol. Thank you again. and VVery VVVVVERRRYYY great poem! lol. bye

Excellent poem..

so much emotion..loved every bit of it.
i loved the part about the tiles so perfect together.

perfect work!

sophie :)

p.s thanx for the comment ..i really appreciate your opinion..

And there are the tiles
Perfect together
But not for me

amazing poem! just beautiful....flawless
--tara