great poem, simply beautiful, adn i'm sorry if it's true...that's so sad...well best of lucks to johnathan...

johnathan is real, and there are a lot of kids who have what he has. due to his mother's disregard to his health, he was born with fetal alcohal syndrome. johnathan is my cousin, but has lived with my family for his whole life, so i consider him my brother. pretty soon, he might move in with his biological father, and i don't want him to leave.

aww that was awesome and so sad, u give that little boy everything he deserves, he is lucky to have a family like ur's, im sure he will be thankfull when he gets older

Good job with dat poem just spell chech it and make shure your words are put together correctly

that was a wonderful poem about a pretty awful topic, and needed to be said...very nicely written...keep up the great work...Luv Michelle