Written very well
Good flow
I like this poem alot -
Its a shame What happened though
Anyway, Great stuff
5/5

"its good fun you'll see.."
should have an apostrophe in it's
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I think the poem started out great, with a great rhythm, but I feel like the rhythm faltered slightly near the end. I also think that the work 'finger' was repeated too often for my comfort, and may have been a proponent in the faltering of the rhythm. Really interesting poem though.