Last Night

by Tim Fleckney   Jun 10, 2006


Last Night

Fading memories of
The night before
I remember the club
Hopping
Wall to wall frenzy
Sexual tension

Persuasive shooter girl
We dated once in
Another life

Blonde girl in the corner
Her top comes off
A fight breaks out
I don’t think I
Was involved

Later that night
A party
Out of control
Taking pills

I think they
Were black

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  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Hey I loved that poem...I agree with Nikki that is a different style for me. But it was still good...well written and it flowed well. Great job.
    I give you a 5/5 xD
    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    I Liked It, Its Diffrent From What I'm Use To Reading And That Intrigues Me Because The Story Plots In This Poem Leads To An Unexpected Ending...Your An Unpredictable Poet, And I Like That Aspect Of Your Writing 5/5 *Craving For More* xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

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