"In short sighted vision."
I'd hyphenate short-sighted
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"melt in the mouth creamy "
I'd hyphenate melt-in-the-mouth
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You make an interesting point about the difference between how things are depicted and how things are. I'm not sure if I understood your intent in writing this poem, but it made ME think that many things in life aren't as great as they are described to be in overly romantic poetry (romantic being the era of poetry, not as in lovey poetry).

Things are not always as they seem or all they are hyped up to be...
This was a heartfelt write that depicted the illusions we face on a daily basis!!
Awesome Write!!

True, things aren't always as they seem. That is why poetry is fantastic. The writer writes something, and someone else interprets it differently.
Very nice write.

Again, great poem! I really liked the meaning behind this one. Things aren't always what they seem. You chose very good language and wording. Honestly loved it alot. Keep up the great work! =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.