The pain in this poem speaks out to the reader. You are extremely talented. I like this poem a lot. Keep them coming, man.

Yes, i agree with paul you are really talented and that poem was totally awesome.Anyway, keep up the good work!
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Omg your poem is fantastic i absulutly love it i felt that way once too and keep tryin dont give up ok nice stuff there :) ~katie~

Thats excellent!@!!!!! i loved it.....joclyn

That was an outsanding poem. keep up the good work!!!!!!!!