by paddy
thank u all for your kind commets |
by craig
Sounds like you met a special someone young in your life, and now they are gone. Found this poem really sad, `turned my world around` I remember saying those exact words after a very painful and messy brake up. To loose someone you love after you have invited them into your heart only for it to be wrenched out leaves you incomplete for a while. Well thats how it effected me anyway and your painful lines brought it all back! I hated it and loved it at the same time (if you know what I mean) truely a sign of great art. Excellent stuff BrokenHeart! I applaud you |