Losing battle

by murder.doll   Jun 10, 2006


The grey clouds gather as she lays there her heart aches.
its quiet, shes alone shes thinking of all her mistakes.
the days have become so long without you.
her breaths shorten, she hopes that these are her last few.
she clutches her arm and drops the blade.
her room becomes fuzzy and her memories start to fade.
she made her final wish come true.
her actions done because she needed you.
thunder rumbles through the night.
this girl fought hard but lost the fight.

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  • 18 years ago

    by tinna

    This is my fav! i wish u would write some more, ur poems are really good and inspire me, im adding u to my fav!

  • 18 years ago

    by Krisanta

    Aww this was a sad poem but i liked it keep up the good work. _krisanta_

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowLastsForever

    Loving this poem.Keep writing.(:
    I'll be waiting.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Really nice poem!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by samigirl90

    OMGSH! I love this poem, it's really good!! You have amazing talent! keep writing!!

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