I loved it, i wish i could write that good. just cause im bored! haha:(
Your a great writer.

Once again you've sucked me in and let me feel what I thought you were going through...And for you to write something like that just because you were bored, that's just another accomplishment you should be very proud of. I knew there was a reason you've been kept on my favourites list from the beginning ;). Anyway, I really just wanted to say that it was another gut wrenching poem in which I found my heart resting on the bottom of my stomach... My own love problems are probably helping to cause that feeling, but even so, that just means I can connect with it easier. Excellent job once again. Thanks for inspiration to write some more tonight - I definately needed it :).

P.S. sorry I am never quite able to give you any words of advice to fix it up - I know that's what these comment boxes were made for; but I just don't think you should change any of it (unless you wanted me to point out some grammar mistakes like the sentence with 'I'am' put in it...but grammar is grammar, the write is what is important and what I was most focused on even after noticing typos- and that too, says alot about the strength of your words.)

Youre a beautiful writer. Youre on my favorites and I wait for your next poem (=

You are such an amazing poet! Just thought I would tell you that! Every poem I read of yours I seem to fall in love with, my dear you are blessed with a talent!

xoxoxo Haley

Your poem is truley beautiful...you should be so proud. Casey

That was very, very good. Especially for a piece written when you were "just bored", haha.

Great poem, though you wrote it in a bored state, it came out beautifully. lol. Keep up the good work, and congrats on winning the contest.

Wow I Won The Contest??...Well I Feel Honored..I Didn't Think This Poem Was Worth Reading...xoxo-Nikki-xoox

That was amazing dear friend...I really like this poem...

Aaww wow this is such an awesome poem!! very deep i loved it =D

I LOVE THIS POEM U WRITE FROM THE HEART

That was really good for a poem you wrote when you were bored. i wish i could write so amazingly.

You write from the heart and I feel it squeezing mine and bringing ur feelings out into my eyes...ur a beautiful person don't lt any1 tell u otherwise..
I give u the love that continues to live in my heart..

AWESOME! AMAZING!
it's very emotional. the ending is so shoking. it really glue ur eyes to the poem. i live it:)

Awesome

Very nice poem i liked it!! i just loved how you just posted... i was bored lol awesome!!! you deserved to win!

Remarkable writing. it's easy to see why it's at the top of the charts.

very well done!

peace
shobhana

Wow......excatly how i feeell

Congratulations on winning the weekly poetry contest. You do deserve it you're poem is beautiful!

Wow. its awesome, no wait its Amazing. you are an exceptional writer! I felt as though it were me feeling this way. Keep it up. You're so talented.