by Megann Lee Jun 10, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Twisted yellow teeth, seen behind the cocky little grin. |
I thought this was amazing. Really discriptive and dark. It was kind of unflowing because you only rhymed in some stanzas but i still think it was awesome!! 5/5 |
"Oh kill me, kill me. |
by Natalie
Wow. This was amazing, I loved it. Especially all the ".." parts. That gave it more strength, well in my eyes it did. You also used pretty good imagry and had great wording. A great well written piece. Keep it up! 5/5 |
by Polly
Aargh that's scary. I don't know it just kinda freaked me out... I get the gist of it but I just can't seem to work out what it all means. I'm not saying it's not good I just can't seem to judge it because I do not understand.... Sorry I shall read more of your poems later! |