Aargh that's scary. I don't know it just kinda freaked me out... I get the gist of it but I just can't seem to work out what it all means. I'm not saying it's not good I just can't seem to judge it because I do not understand.... Sorry I shall read more of your poems later!
- Polly

Wow. This was amazing, I loved it. Especially all the ".." parts. That gave it more strength, well in my eyes it did. You also used pretty good imagry and had great wording. A great well written piece. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

"Oh kill me, kill me.
Kill it, kill it, slaughter it, and gag it."
[My favorite lines!]
OH MY GOD! I got chills when I read this.. It drug me in and kept me till the very end... Just Damn.. Amazing job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I thought this was amazing. Really discriptive and dark. It was kind of unflowing because you only rhymed in some stanzas but i still think it was awesome!! 5/5