Jd, you don't know how hard that one hit me...

Very touching poem. I have a similiar poem like this called "masks" Great job

Hey good poem, I like when you said "He hides a secret past beneath
the Cheshire-like Grin..." Keep up the good work.

-Jason

I absolutely love this poem! Theres just something about it.. I dont even have a word to describe it. It just stuck to me, the horribleness of that father, and the innocence of that young girl and what she has yet to become. WOW! I loved it! 5/5*

@...wow...im soo happy i read some of your poems...they really are good!....i really liked this one too:):)....keep up the writting, u were born to do it:):) 5/5...@

The last stanza of your poem is amazing. It's perfect!
Many people write about these "fake smiles", but your poem is original and I liked the way it described the situation.

XoXo
Gaby

This is a fantastic piece. I am sure many can relate to people not being all they seem and you expressed this wonderfully ina fairly unique manor. Great piece

5/5

Another amazing write, Allah. I don't even know what to say about this one. It was so intense. I loved it. Keep it up!!

[[ Poetess ]]

5/5 FOR SURE! I totally love how you write! I m going to have fun reading your poems and I know for sure your on my favorites!

Absolutely.......
(C'est la vie to that)
..... wonderfully painfull
(holding within lies)
here we go again
saying what needs to be said

more later
Luv,
me

Beautiful poem
beautifully written
its a gr8 piece
keep it going..
write more...
5/5
love
amy