Maroon

by LockedInEternity   Jun 11, 2006


*tiny little poem..

I take a look upon my wrists.
and with the lighting of the moon,
I see the perfect blend of skin,
with all my cuts that turned maroon.

On rosy flesh they look so dark,
they look so full of different pains..
and I remember every cut..
and all those dried up maroon stains...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    How sad your words.Hope everything will be fine soon.
    I really like short poems that burst into a whole world of thoughts..
    5/5

    Keep on writing on what u feel and like.

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good, short poem. Just one thing suggestions, capitalize your "I"

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Very deep and the emotions which are crammed in are very well expressed, the language really creates a sombre tone which is appropriate for this poem. a great write :)

    -biscuit-

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Small poem but it was great. Very different to most self harm poems. You also had great rhyming happening. I loved it. Keep up the great work!! 5/5 =)

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    For such a short poem it surely packed a lot of emotion, which is hard to do--Everything about it is perfect, the flow, format, word choice, everything---Great write! Keep it up-

    I voted on this poem when I did the free voting post,,,5/5

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