Well firstly would like u to correct the spelling of "remember"

now this is really a very short and i must admit a very deep poem, just loved it as the more simple it looks, more meaningful it is, great write indeed

all the best and take care
5/5

Well, short or not! I thought it was wonderful...Even tho it wasnt long it showed a lot of emotion..you really know how to express your feelings!

I am starting to like short poems....glad I read yours! But whether short, long, one line or two...over all it was good..we all need these little writes when we have things on our mind!

I think short poems are difficult to write well, but this was good. Not amazing, but good. I like the repitition of maroon and it is a strong poem. Well done

Still need to comment on 3 more, but I have to do something now. Will get to it as soon as I can

Aw.. that is so sad.. you described everything perfectly in this, and I loved it. My favorite lines were:
On rosy flesh they look so dark,
they look so full of different pains..
Those lines just really stood out to me. Great job on this! 5/5**

Awww honey this is very sweet and simply expressed!
I enjoyed every line and stanza, not much stanzas thou ,hehe =D
I love your poems its very sweet
keep it up and thanks for your lovely comments(sorry for my late reply :S)
Luv
NemO x0x0x0x0x

For such a short poem it surely packed a lot of emotion, which is hard to do--Everything about it is perfect, the flow, format, word choice, everything---Great write! Keep it up-

I voted on this poem when I did the free voting post,,,5/5

Small poem but it was great. Very different to most self harm poems. You also had great rhyming happening. I loved it. Keep up the great work!! 5/5 =)

Natalie``

Very deep and the emotions which are crammed in are very well expressed, the language really creates a sombre tone which is appropriate for this poem. a great write :)

-biscuit-

Good, short poem. Just one thing suggestions, capitalize your "I"

How sad your words.Hope everything will be fine soon.
I really like short poems that burst into a whole world of thoughts..
5/5

Keep on writing on what u feel and like.