by Dani Jun 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Do you remember that day? |
Really good poem-I like the topic of it---The only thing is that its a little short but many good poems are short. I think you could add to the poem and add more about the emotion because the topic of it is a very strong and powerful one. The flow was good, but the two lines I had trouble really smoothly are: |