You're the reason I hide,
and you're the reason I cry,
you're the reason I hurt,
you're the reason I lie,
it's you,
your fault,
you hurt me,
more than anyone knows,
more than anyone could ever feel pain,
you took my heart,
and shattered it into pieces,
leaving it to be mended,
leaving me to cry,
but you don't realize how your lies affected me,
I thought you cared,
and I though you loved me,
but I was wrong,
wrong about loving a person like you,
you were only there to hurt me,
and to break my heart into pieces,
when you left I cried,
not opening my heart for another,
but now I'm fine,
and all my sorrow is gone,
I hope you realize you did me wrong,
when I see you no hate will be in my heart,
no love for you will be there,
you don't exist to me any more,
so leave,
go away,
you mean nothing to me!
"Your the reason I hide,
and your the reason I cry,
your the reason I hurt,
your the reason I lie,"
All of those 'your's should be you're
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"and shattered it in to pieces,"
in this case, 'into' is one word
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"leaving it to be mended,
leaving me to cry,"
I liked the repitition here, and throughout the poem. The repeated words added a great emphasis and helped develop a certain rhythm. I thought this poem held a lot of emotion and developed it pretty well.