Wake Me Up

by Raven Roth   Jun 11, 2006


A frown on my face.
I feel like such a disgrace.
You ignore me.
You don't know me.
Not at all.
And you lie and say that you understand.
You don't care.
You force me to see only the bad
And you say that I will always be wrong.
Hit the gong to wake me up.
I want out of this nightmare.
Away from the laughs and stares..
I want someone who care,and who will wipe away the tears.
Listen to me for once,
Make it a two way conversation.
I'm giving you an invitation to see my life the life I lead.

Mix insomnia, anger and depression and this is what you get.
I needed something to do so here you go.

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  • 17 years ago

    by DarkLore

    It's so hard to find someone to relate to, someone not hiding behind masks and hidden agenda's, I think you described the anguish behind that so eloquently.

    A very sad poem but one that is sadly very true.

    Great art, keep writing :)

  • 17 years ago

    by No one

    Ooo, it's good. I really like it. I guess those feelings are relateble. It's very personal and uses strong words, keep it up.

    xxxx
    Lizzy.

  • 17 years ago

    by NIDAL

    God poem...it shows you have great deal of pain and you express it in a wnderful and moving way...good job keep it up ..see my latest poems "GIFTS OF SORROW" "ARABIAN SANDS" "MY TEARS"

  • 18 years ago

    by me

    Hey i thought dis poem was man good i get wat ur trying to say and it has a great flow keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lilninja

    I like ur poem its just a bit confuseing on wat its saying idk srry i just dont get it..lol..send me a message or comment on wat it means i would like to know...lol.. ne wayz 5/5 ! great job!

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