I thought that was really good and it made so much sense, please keep writing my friend
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I like ur poem its just a bit confuseing on wat its saying idk srry i just dont get it..lol..send me a message or comment on wat it means i would like to know...lol.. ne wayz 5/5 ! great job!

Hey i thought dis poem was man good i get wat ur trying to say and it has a great flow keep it up!!

God poem...it shows you have great deal of pain and you express it in a wnderful and moving way...good job keep it up ..see my latest poems "GIFTS OF SORROW" "ARABIAN SANDS" "MY TEARS"

Ooo, it's good. I really like it. I guess those feelings are relateble. It's very personal and uses strong words, keep it up.

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Lizzy.

It's so hard to find someone to relate to, someone not hiding behind masks and hidden agenda's, I think you described the anguish behind that so eloquently.

A very sad poem but one that is sadly very true.

Great art, keep writing :)