Ver nice haiku! It was great! Keep it up. 5/5

`Taleee xx

Great one Simon.... 5/5 Take care my friend, and can't wait to read more. Hugs...

Mmm, as Bob said, a perfect haiku. Your poetry is a delight to read and you have such an easy inviting manner with formed poetry that makes me want to try more. A beautiful poem!
Amour,
Kim

Awesome Haiku Simon!

Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
Appreciated- Truly Spoken