Nice poem.. really made me question myself.. Keep it up. =)

That is the best poetry ive seen in ages...i loved it. you wrote i so well without directly sayin what u want people to know you still got the main message across. if only people could let go of thier pride. thanx for writting that...it was a great read.
keanna

Truly intresting one... Something to think about... And something very new... Wonderful poem... A great write!

Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
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Wow. This has a very good message to it; I love the last stanza, especially. It's vry profound and thought provoking. This poem makes me want to be a better person. As a Christian, I can truly relate. Wonderful job!

Whoa!! That was truly beautifully written! You really got the point across without really saying it!! hehe that was truly a wonderful read..Keep it up!!!!!! *big hug* :D

Beautifully penned message. The flow was superb. Excellent job!