by Jessica Jun 11, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
Faces of many kinds |
Sorry it took so long went on vacation well still on vacation, anyways this was a good poem great story that most high school kids can relate to. I could't find the flow, but im sure it's there. |
by Ye Seul
Aww.... i am going to miss our school a lot and i will look at my yearbook untill it tears!!! It is really easy to understand as i read your poem!!! Nice job and i will miss you tonz!! :( |
Yea i just got my yearbook on friday. i loved yrbooks. gr8 poem, very tru. 5/5 |
by Sean Allen
Ending with the start was a very good touch, I thought it wrapped the poem up quite nicely. The second stanza was my favorite, because it had a lot of short lines that sort of made a quick, cascading rhythm. |
by vika
Hey jessy! i relli love ur poems! dis one is so close to what i feel! gr8 job! |