Loved the 4th stanza. This was yet another great poem. Reminded me alot of school. You worded everything so well. Truly a wonderfull job! Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee xx

HI jessy...I know!! Its just so sad...Its end of the year...i cant believe it too!! Pictures...ahhh..they are like all the memories...Well..you expressd your emotions very well...MINE TOO..LOL! luff ya tonz...keep wrting about your emotions!! i love them!

Great poem. 5/5
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That was so kool... and i kno that feeling...i hav done that...i wrote a poem about the year ending...its called "another year's end" u are a really good poet tho and even w/o rhymingit was terrific and heartfelt..i can tell how much u love these ppl..good job!
love ya lots,
sore

WOW that was really good! reminds me when im looking back on all my yearbooks great job!

KurMiT

Wonderful Job! I loved the second stanza. Thank you for entering my contest

Hey jessy! i relli love ur poems! dis one is so close to what i feel! gr8 job!

Ending with the start was a very good touch, I thought it wrapped the poem up quite nicely. The second stanza was my favorite, because it had a lot of short lines that sort of made a quick, cascading rhythm.

This is a poem that I'm sure a lot of people can relate to.

Yea i just got my yearbook on friday. i loved yrbooks. gr8 poem, very tru. 5/5

Aww.... i am going to miss our school a lot and i will look at my yearbook untill it tears!!! It is really easy to understand as i read your poem!!! Nice job and i will miss you tonz!! :(

Sorry it took so long went on vacation well still on vacation, anyways this was a good poem great story that most high school kids can relate to. I could't find the flow, but im sure it's there.

good write 4/5