Who's better?

by glass*wall*prison   Jun 11, 2006


What makes a Christian
better than the lost?
Absolutely nothing,
but i think were better off.

Before you get offended,
give me time to explain.
Imagine if you will
Two men on a plane.

One with a parachute,
and the other without.
Wich one is better off
is clear without a doubt.

So when it is time,
for the plane to crash.
We will have our chutes
while you will be thrashed.

We always have are chutes
Because in it we trust,
but the chute isn't a chute at all.
It's a man and his name is Jesus.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was pretty good.. you obviously put a lot of thought into it.. this flowed well and the descriptions were good..

    We always have are chutes
    ^ here, i think you meant "our" not "are" but maybe i am mistaken

    good write! enjoyed reading it.. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Umm, i dunno. I thought it was okay, and it flowed well, but i agree with Kaylee. Maybe you needed some more deeper detail about what you were saying.
    love Tara-Kay
    Beautifully poetic

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Alright while this wasnt eaxctly one of your better poems, it was pretty alright. I think you could have explained a bit more. I really think faith should be a parachute but that's just me as different religions have their own faith even though just having faith could be universal. Also I don't think having it as evryone else and thrashed is really all that well. Even though you say not to get offended there might be people who are. Just maybe try going into more detail about whatyou are trying to say.

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