Hey really good job there. I loved the way you constructed this poem. lovely imagery. keep it up! xoxo Ruthie

Hey chickie

Its errie that I can relate to that feeling... like the mirror is evil... and that I'm am somehow the moster. but bleh thats what you get for living in a socitey like ours right? =] Thankyou for your wonderful comment on "Label this" I'm glad to see im not the only one who disagrees with labels. grr they annoy me to no END! lol

Fab poem but a few poniters if you elborate and set this into stanza girly this would be A-MAZZZZING, not that it already isnt..or is....how does that saying work 0__O lol. Either way I love it and would marry it =]

Keep up the steller work
Jenn

A monster, gleaming in the dark
Cinching away
Corrupt vision
24-inch waist
Wonderful figure
A perfect face
Eyes staring in

*shakes fist at the mirror*

Interesting, very interesting. i like it : ) well done. very kool

Wow, great poem. Perfect construction and i love the idea, obsessed and killed by vanity and the perfect body. keep up the great work.

I liked this. it was really different. Kinda what I look for in a poem :) Anyways, I hope to read more.

This is really interesting...very eerie. i like it
good job