LLright you had my attention with the title. For some reason I'm drawn about writing the sea as a peaceful area and this poem just had that for me. I could picture your third stanza the best as it held so much imagery. An emotional write. To me though there were some awkward wording here and there
If you placed me in front of an ocean right now
[Maybe take off the right now]
I just want to float on my back and watch the clouds
[Maybe instead of and watch you could put watching.]
Think of the memories that are now thrown away
[Maybe think of memories thrown away]
And not have to push through a crowd
[Maybe Not having to push through crowds]
Just some suggestions :) It's up to you.

Damn good write Chels!! A very enjoyable read. Deep, and touching. A special write, filled with sadness. Stay strong girlie!!

Hey Chelz, I understand how you're feeling right now, I'm feeling the same way. But I've learned something in the last few days and that is that God takes care of us in his own way, he puts obstacles in our life that he knows we will be able to handle and learn from it and make us stronger for it. And I know that whatever it is you're going through you will get through it just fine. Take one day at a time, keep yourself busy and breath... take time for you.

This is a very heartfelt and emotional write. Sad but written so beautifully. Stay strong sweetie and know that I am here if you need anything. Big hugs and lots of love to ya!

My dear Chels,
I don't know what has been giving you such torchered pain but what I do know that you are a "fighter" . I know you will fight your way through this sadness and come out a winner .

Many times in our live we will have struggles but always remember God is walking hand in hand with us throughout our journey through life .

Never question this Chels :Why is it you make me feel I shouldn’t have been created?

You were created out of love " the love of God " and he knows what a beautiful soul you have as do I.

Hold onto your faith and you will come out just fine , my dear .

I am always and I mean ALWAYS here for you . Though 100's of miles separate us you are always in my thoughts and prayers .Give yourself a big ((HUG)) and tell yourself .....I AM SPECIAL
Love ya A..I.D, KEEP YOUR CHIN UP BABY GIRL

Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
Appreciated- Truly Spoken