I think its great. You expressed how you feel. It takes a man to do that;-)

Hmm... its nice
and cute
but in my opinion love doesnt have Violent in it right... i dont know its my opinion... but its well written keep it up

Awww =[
how about...
I
L
O
V
E
Y
O
U
=] its true =] the most truest thing in the world if that a word =] love you =]
mre than anything never forget it =]
5/5
lovelove
Alice
xxxx