"don;t say hello,"
heh, you got a semicolon in there instead of an apostrophe.
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"you don't love me anymore,"
I think this would sound better if phrased as a question, e.g.:
"don't you love me anymore"
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I think that once the poem got to the line "coming around", the rhythm was disrupted. The leading cause of this was probably a change in how long the lines were. If I were you, I'd try to lengthen a few of the lines, if not every other one to set up a varying rhythm. Good poem, and nice details, especially at the start.