Break of Sanity

by MemoirsOfMe   Jun 11, 2006


{FreeVerse}

Chasing these memories
Remembering all the lies
Putting behind decit
Trying to make a new life
Recovering from the pain
Getting back upon my feet
Caring for others
Not realizing what I needed
Tripping on your stories
Effort to forget the past
Running from your power
Hoping things wouldn't last
Thinking - everlasting hope -
Dreaming for something more
Wondering for better things
Not wanting to go back to before
A broken record of trial
Forever it might play
Here, in this broken world,
Here, I'm meant to stay.
Here, my face falls in pain,
Here, washed away by my tears,
Here, my end comes to reality,
Here, the break of sanity.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Hmm, simple and effective. i enjoyed reading this heaps! free verse, i shoudl consider that some time, looks like it's the new kind of poetry. lol

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Beautifully woven words, good format and nice flow. Good added emotion and sense of reality as well. Overall wonderful write.
    5.5

    As always~ Kate

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    This poem was incredible. You had a wonderful sequence of events that ended in a powerful conclusion. Your word choices where amazing and so was your flow. That was an excellent poem hun. Thank you for the sweet comment that you left me.

    -Tainted

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey fantasticly written hun! sorry I havn't been around lately but year 12 is killing me! lol anywhoo! good job keep it up! *hugs* ruthie xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    Another excellent poem. I loved how deep your poems go and you have such an amazing rhyme scheme. I love it! This poem tells a lot about you, its a wonderful piece, 5/5. so amazing.

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