Brilliant, I love the last two lines! Great job!

xoxoxo Haley

I loved the contrast, is that the word, in your third stanza and how your words were not forced. Your poems always have the effect that they had been worked on with a lot of though. Though your fourth stanza I didn't much care for as your poems always seem above those type of things. Your final stanza was sad very much.

Kaylee is right in her assesment of the way your poems just flow effortlessly, you are a true talent and I am proud to put you on my favorites list. Please continue your brilliant work. Timothy r