"Sometimes a child will take a seat
To gather up the thoughts
Of fairy tales and legends
And images that time forgot."

The whole poem is great, but that stanza just rocks!
Well done, Mom! Love ya~Holly

OMG I can't believe I have just come across Holly's mom .....Glad to meet you .

The imagery you have created in this piece is amazing .A wonderfully written piece that paints a clear picture with words.

Sometimes at night they come and sit
To nurse a broken heart
Or some come just to cry a bit
When their lives fall all apart.
^^^
Last line in this stanza I would maybe change to :
When their lives fall apart or
When their lives have fallen apart

Great write !

Beautiful to say the least. Wonderfully written... Loved it!

You are so good at this
how do these things just come to you?
this is great 5/5

The bench.. you gave me a whole of things to think about.. i love this poem of yours.. i love the way you write.. it haunts me..

~pilar ann

Comment #4:
I have absolutely no negative thing to say when I read your stuff. I feel extremely inadequate to critique you! There's no way I would think of myself talented enough to say that you should change this or that. There's really nothing to change. :) Keep it up!
~Midnight Sun